you certainly cashed in on the book page to poem deal. Except yours somehow finds all the cliche's possible in such a sort amount of time. Nice job, douche-cookie.
#3 by Kim, Jul 10, 2008
I like this, well done.
#4 by dreams my you bled dry, Aug 9, 2008
Scream feeling. You were the insanity. That's not deep, that's just tacky. Nice MS Paint "airbrush" lines. Go outside or something.